Friday, December 10, 2004

Koolaid's Kool Comments

Rating: 4.1

Liver little
Bile of ages run
Acid of humanity
Shudder in the morning sun
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Kelly Vinal
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Simon Whild 29 October 2005

Yet another winner. It reminds me of some of the French symbolists poets who mixed sybolic gestures to create a sum of more than the combined parts. My impression was very clear and I shall keep reading this poem for a long time to come.

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Lenchen Elf 11 December 2004

shall now go and take a long hard look at my lifes infrastructure: -)

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Sandra Osborne 10 December 2004

Excellent. I like your style very much.

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Kelly Vinal

Kelly Vinal

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