Tuesday, August 12, 2008

Koolaid Balloons Comments

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She liked the very idea
and I the taste
of KoolAid, grape,
in her innie,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich1 12 August 2008

Thanks but I don't usually worry about that too much. If you know the rules (I don't) please correct. Best H

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Dai Bach 12 August 2008

Really, really like this poem. I do think however, that the punctuation could do with a tweak. D

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