Tuesday, July 5, 2016

Koi Keyun Aaye Comments

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Koi keyun aaye mere ghar se jo khushboo aaye,
Jan jate hayn sabhi bhoole se gar too aaye.
Wyse mushkil hay chupane se na chup paye gi,
Keya badi bat hay chupke se agar too aaye
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 August 2016

humm woh roshni hain jisse aapney diya tha bulava jubh humm aye bhuja diya apne thoda sa bachha kuchha diye ka ujjaalaa humm aye theiy narash nahin hone kay liye aap ney bund kardiya apne dill ka darwaza khuda hafiz hai abh humarra

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Rajnish Manga 24 August 2016

बहुत खूब, अख्तर जवाद साहब. इस खुबसूरत ग़ज़ल सी दूसरी कोई हो नहीं सकती. शुक्रिया, जनाब. आपकी बेमिसाल ग़ज़ल से ही एक शे'र पेश-ए-खिदमत है: कोई क्यों आये मेरे घर से जो खुशबू आए जान जाते हैं सभी भूले से ग़र तू आए

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2016

Very amazing poem shared on love topic that really gives amazing thrill on reading. Wise drafting shared.10

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M Asim Nehal 05 July 2016

Wah wah....Man Ja itne pe tujhse bhi wahi boo aaye......Dil ko khush aur tarotaza karne wali is pyar bhai nazm ke liye hum aapke shukrguzar hain.....10+++++++

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