Wednesday, September 10, 2008

Koi Haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

Flashes of gold fins

blowing bubbles and hiding
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
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Dr Antony Theodore 07 July 2019

blowing bubbles and hiding. as i read it i naturally smiled. vry fine poem, very very poetic heart you have. tony

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Roy Storey 14 September 2008

I like short poems haiku are good for this, it a nice one thank you.

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