Saturday, October 24, 2009

Known Unknown Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't knew whom my eyes saw first time
Either I knew whats the first word I had spoken
Or even my first step that I took to stand
Neither the first thing that made me smile
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Anju Addanki 27 October 2009

arey yaar thats so true. Its a very different poem and nicely written.

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Shashendra Amalshan 26 October 2009

This is a very interesting poem. The paradox in your title aroused my curiosity. And poem didn't disappoint either. It is a poem that offers great wisdom to the reader. I see, you haven't used your regular rhyming patterns here.In that sense, I feel you have answered your critics and shown the versatility in your writing. Having said that rhyming ones are not bad at all. Not many people can bring out the same kinda emotions and wisdom when they restrict themselves to a certain format. And you are good at that kinda poetry too.. Yet, this is a good work too. A poem that offers lot to the reader..10++ regards Shan

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Louis Rams 26 October 2009

a lot of qustions to be answered, but are they known or unknown? a ten

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 October 2009

Most of the things we know, we do and we feel remain unknown but they remain in our subconscious.

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rago rago 26 October 2009

well write...........and finely placed..............

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Marieta Maglas 25 October 2009

wonderful abstract poem, very well composed............10+++++

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Surya . 25 October 2009

oh! what a beautiful poem. surely they had right reasons. voted10 surya

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Janell Cressman 24 October 2009

that is cool, it's so true you don't remember a lot of your fists but you know what all your joy and hardships have takin you and how they have help shape you into who you are, amazing write my friend! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (10 and more then 10)

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Eyan Desir 24 October 2009

very true Kranthi..10s good write

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Joseph Poewhit 24 October 2009

We are a collection of experiences

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Rajaram Ramachandran 24 October 2009

A simple admission of many unknowns in the words of this nice poetry.

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Shanta Majumder 24 October 2009

'liked your thought process....so true it is....

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