I don't knew whom my eyes saw first time
Either I knew whats the first word I had spoken
Or even my first step that I took to stand
Neither the first thing that made me smile
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This is a very interesting poem. The paradox in your title aroused my curiosity. And poem didn't disappoint either. It is a poem that offers great wisdom to the reader. I see, you haven't used your regular rhyming patterns here.In that sense, I feel you have answered your critics and shown the versatility in your writing. Having said that rhyming ones are not bad at all. Not many people can bring out the same kinda emotions and wisdom when they restrict themselves to a certain format. And you are good at that kinda poetry too.. Yet, this is a good work too. A poem that offers lot to the reader..10++ regards Shan
a lot of qustions to be answered, but are they known or unknown? a ten
Most of the things we know, we do and we feel remain unknown but they remain in our subconscious.
wonderful abstract poem, very well composed............10+++++
oh! what a beautiful poem. surely they had right reasons. voted10 surya
that is cool, it's so true you don't remember a lot of your fists but you know what all your joy and hardships have takin you and how they have help shape you into who you are, amazing write my friend! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (10 and more then 10)
A simple admission of many unknowns in the words of this nice poetry.
arey yaar thats so true. Its a very different poem and nicely written.