Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, December 14, 2012

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It is known concept
We have to follow it promptly
Nothing comes in life that easily
Do not expect it to come readily
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 December 2012

deep and quite right Sam Kealii Lu28 minutes ago I love your poem and agree with you 100%. Written from experiences? Comment +1 Very descriptive

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 December 2012

Maitreya Heart29 minutes ago The rhyme was good but strained. Cadence not quite on the mark. You have a very good way with description. I could visualize what you were describing easily.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 December 2012

It is known concept We have to follow it promptly Nothing comes in life that easily Do not expect it to come readily

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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