It is known concept
We have to follow it promptly
Nothing comes in life that easily
Do not expect it to come readily
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Maitreya Heart29 minutes ago The rhyme was good but strained. Cadence not quite on the mark. You have a very good way with description. I could visualize what you were describing easily.
It is known concept We have to follow it promptly Nothing comes in life that easily Do not expect it to come readily
deep and quite right Sam Kealii Lu28 minutes ago I love your poem and agree with you 100%. Written from experiences? Comment +1 Very descriptive