Knowing Myself Comments

like a knighted warrior, life has to go on the shore..... as we know, life close no door but a forward to live, until the shadow gives no more... its final countdown.... of who we are in this world of existence...a 10 +++

beautiful lines and well knitted words...........awesome............

Its really wonderful superb poem.

fear..desire and mind..dealt beautifully...rhyme and rhythm goes well with each line...10

i believe ' ted' said it right on all three, on that i must agree. well written a ten

excellent poem, nice rhymes, thank you for sharing..................10

Arrrrrrrr! excelllet! with fine rhyme and rhythm judged thoughtfully! 10+

Be light unto yourself...........a good write............

Very nicely said. Full of observation and insight. Liked the poem.

Hard times bring out one's true colors

We need a little of fear to stop us from doing the wrong, and dangerous desire is to fuel our ambitions and be productive the Mind runs the show. Nice interesting write......10+++

'Fear, Desire, and Mind', in these three different angles 'Myself' has been judged well.

a truely amazing poem! ! ! ! ! love it(10)