Friday, June 26, 2009

Knowing I Will Never Be The Same Comments

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i know my life will never be the same,
and neither will i,
just the feeling i get,
makes me question every day,
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mona martinez
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Shashendra Amalshan 15 August 2009

Yeah I do agree! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Many people have all sorts of opinions about me too.. Yet what matters is your opinion of yourself.. For instance I think about death too.. wonder whether there is a heaven.. honestly don't know.. May be your days will turn out to be great! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! And I love the manner in which you end the poem... A song.. inspirational one.. Hands-By Jewel I could tell the world just one thing It would be that we're all OK And not to worry 'cause worry is wasteful And useless in times like these I won't be made useless I won't be idle with despair I will gather myself around my faith For light does the darkness most fear My hands are small, I know But they're not yours, they are my own But they're not yours, they are my own And I am never broken Poverty stole your golden shoes It didn't steal your laughter And heartache came to visit me But I knew it wasn't ever after We'll fight, not out of spite For someone must stand up for what's right 'Cause where there's a man who has no voice There ours shall go singing My hands are small I know But they're not yours, they are my own But they're not yours, they are my own I am never broken In the end only kindness matters In the end only kindness matters I will get down on my knees, and I will pray I will get down on my knees, and I will pray I will get down on my knees, and I will pray My hands are small I know But they're not yours, they are my own But they're not yours, they are my own And I am never broken My hands are small I know But they're not yours, they are my own But they're not yours, they are my own And I am never broken We are never broken People can, sing, and pray, yet all this is EASIER SAID than done though! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! love shan

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 01 July 2009

Well penned.Deep emotions here, i like it.

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this is well written.. i think it is........

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Oscar Cantu 27 June 2009

Just to think what it would be like if everybody was the same gives me chills, i'm glad everybodys different in a way. Good write.

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