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Great poem. Intent comes across clear. Adeline

Very well done and said Sonya. I was barely breathing as i read. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

beautiful feel.beautiful touch. nice poem.voted10 surya

It's gorgeous - you can feel the air rise on the back of your neck. Beautifully done

A beautiful expression of an intimate moment. You leave open the question of whether he is aware that she is aware of him. Nicely done.

this beautiful indeed, , , i loved this lines.... very moving and passionate write friend! ! ! with lots of lv shan

Two bodies but one soul. A state of realization and bliss. Penned with masterly skill. CP

And so you ask can one hear a heart and soul singing? The answer is YES! For in your words I can clearly hear your heart and soul. Ahhhhh, what a beautiful song that you do sing.

Intimacy penned sweetly and concisely. Beautiful poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

So many emotions stirred in so few words - wonderful stuff! S :)

When bodies and souls become one, all inner feelings become vocal. A very romantic piece of write, Sonya.

This is so very sweet..lovely....

Ah, it's good to be back, discovering the best new work on poemhunter! Nice one Sonya...I can feel the atmosphere...

Very romantic. Two souls in tune. May the music never end.10/10. Always your friend, Sandra