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ok, again ending a sad and melancholy lines, of love being rejected, of love being denied or betrayed... But of course, the dark side of love is found in life's reality. Thank for nicely painting it.

ok, again ending a sad and melancholy lines, of love being rejected, of love being denied or betrayed... But of course, the dark side of love is found in life's reality. Thank for nicely painting it.

beautifully written... nice poem indeed... metaphors are written uniquely... keep writing...

Nice usage of figure of speech.The anxiety of a true lover is seen in every nuke and corner! A nice poem indeed.

Unrequited love - always brings heartache which issues from the poet's pen. Nice write.

this is totally great. i my self like to know others and help them as much as i can. good work my dear friend. Ellias.

great masterpiece of art especially the ending.and also peddie for the love reminds me one of great poem in our language written by a famoust poet in our country.you may noy know him but he was so great.his name is Sohrab Sepehri. he is written: I SAW IN THE ALLEY A PEDDIER PEDDIED LOVE AND LIGHT i think this is the best simile for the one who begs for the love.the love must be bilateral. thank you for this marvelous poem.provoked lots of nostalgia i had with him. ~nb

You wrote it as it felt and it came across well. You are so reserved when it comes to capturing love! Go get em! Win their hearts with some Kelvin magic! that's how my heart interacts with your sweet pen this day. X x