Love slips nimbly through my fingers
like a dull scorching knife
Takes all I can't give
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Well, this poem is certainly filled with great metaphors and more. That's what makes a poem a poem, That mysteriously it opens hidden doors The imagery and feeling expressed in this poem make it definitely superb! Excellent gift!
Well written, Maya. I seldom enjoy 'love' poems and this was nicely done