Saturday, August 27, 2016

Knot Work Comments

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Ryan Tyger
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Raiven Moore 27 August 2016

I spy Alliteration...It's a form I use within poems sometimes and it works so very well to pass over an added Omph! I think unless you didn't mean to add that the way I picked it up and it's just your style.. I like the whole thing the way you only want them to remember you kindly..that's such a lovely thought and we are more than two sided I would think there is a myriad of parts which make us whole..but, that's just what it made me think and I hope you don't mind..

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Ryan Tyger 28 August 2016

No I don't mind at all.As a matter of the fact Im now thoughtful Alliteration that's new to me could you expound on that and your meaning.

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Kelly Kurt 27 August 2016

An eloquently penned piece, Ryan. Thanks

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