Knot, Another Rose Bush Comments

This is a wonderful poem of self-discovery. It shows the actual progress almost moment to moment to the realization THIS IS ME! NOT THAT OTHER IMAGE I WAS IMITATING! I like the way the jade plant frames your self-discovery, because it make the REALYOU who is fully present at the end of the poem as natural and inevitable as the plant. And at the very end we get a glimmer of the majestic world of KUSH, which lives on in you.

Better to know in youth the power of truth. The journey's to long I chased the illusion of song. School and the hearth, soft the heart. Please be appeased there I dwell....iip