Knocking Your Door By Carson Tp Alexander Comments

Some good thoughts are expressed. I don't want to judge or anything but you might want to take a look at some Poetry Forms and the rhyming schemes of how they usually build up the foundation of a poetic structure of a certain poem...the massages are good but you lack a little in poetic form and patterns of writing.

Very poignant write.Exhibits your dynamic poetic abilities.

This is very definitely abstract. You have done well to explore such complex thoughts and ideas. tfs