Knocking At The Doors Comments

Thank you for the comments everyone. It's interesting to receive feedback from people I've never met before. It somehow seems more... truthful. To set the record straight. I am still knocking, haven't been let in yet. However, that's fine. Im cool with it. I very much appreciate the positive comments. Its all a writer wants to hear really. That people got what he was trying to say.

You're the same through space and time. It's good, Gabe! Although knocking can get mundane, don't stop believing.

So I will keep knocking till the end of time, Till my own heart within yours resides, Till I'm so close that I feel you within, Till the two that are twain, become one person. a touching write

'Forever on the outside while inside I still yearn.'....This line really touched me. Over all, this is a lovely poem on love. If the situation described is autobiographical, I only hope that it catches the attention of your target audience and motivate her to keep her doors ajar.