Tuesday, December 31, 2002

Knocked Up Comments

Rating: 3.5


I'm lyin' on the barren ground that's baked and cracked with drought,
And dunno if my legs or back or heart is most wore out;
I've got no spirits left to rise and smooth me achin' brow --
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Henry Lawson
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Bill Cantrell 03 August 2024

This is pathetic for good poetry….. every time I think about coming back to Paul home and stuff like this changes my mind

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 August 2024

I have read this great poem with tremendous inner sadness and melancholy. A brilliant Australian poem by the only poet who got a State Funeral in Australia. That's amazing!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 August 2024

Most deserving poem today chosen again by Poem Hunter and Team as The Classic Poem Of The Day.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 August 2024

This poem portrays the harsh realities of those living on the Australian frontier during the late 19th century. The tone is one of resignation and hopelessness. Lawson's poem is oft of greatest reality. TOP Marks and Thanks for sharing

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Brooke Renwick 03 August 2024

Henry Lawson uses longer lines but is still able to measure well I have noticed.

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Femi Ogunlude 10 June 2024

I absorb inspiration from each line. A excellent work of creativity.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 June 2024

FIVE: Summed up, the central theme revolves around the relentless struggle for survival and the toll it takes on both body and spiri

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 June 2024

FOUR: It captures the weariness of a life spent tramping through drought, mud, and rain, highlighting the sacrifices made by those trying to survive in a harsh environment.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 June 2024

THREE: The poem vividly describes physical exhaustion, emotional weariness, and the relentless trudging through challenging conditions..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 June 2024

TWO: emphasizing the struggles of individuals in an unforgiving and cruel society.

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Bill Cantrell 03 August 2024

My dear friend, just cause the makes a point don't make it a good point, this is trash and gods eyes I'm concerned, but I'm no poet

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 June 2024

ONE: This poem portrays the harsh realities faced by those living on the Australian frontier during the late 19th century. The tone is one of resignation and hopelessness,

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 February 2024

The heat is bad, the water is bad....

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 February 2024

FIVE: The poem resonates with the weariness of a life marked by struggle, emphasizing the toll it takes on both body and spirit. It's a powerful exploration of endurance, resilience, and the human condition in the face of adversity

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 February 2024

FOUR: I cite a few lines from the poem: "I'm lyin' on the barren ground that's baked and cracked with drought, And dunno if my legs or back or heart is most wore out; I've got no spirits left to rise and smooth me achin' brow - I'm too knocked up to light a fire and bile the billy now..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 February 2024

THREE: The barren landscape, the relentless journey, and the weariness of existence are all woven into the fabric of this poignant piece of Australian literature.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 February 2024

TWO: The central character, a woman, becomes a victim of this unforgiving environment, forced to bear the consequences of her actions alone. The poem captures the struggle, weariness, and physical exhaustion of a life spent trudging through adversity.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 February 2024

ONE: The poem delves into the harshness of Australian society. Lawson paints a vivid picture of a society that is unforgiving and cruel, especially to those who find themselves vulnerable.

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Babatunde Aremu 27 April 2014

Wonderful poem! I like it

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Michelle Claus 27 April 2014

Excellent ballad. I'll read this many times and always like it.

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James Mclain 27 April 2014

What a master piece, t'would take me days to create one like this...iip

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Henry Lawson

Henry Lawson

Grenfell, New South Wales
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