Sunday, April 26, 2009

Knock Comments

Rating: 5.0

Standing out side the door to unhappiness I took my last breath of freedom.
I would of done any thing to run.
A million questions left unanswered.
Knock, please lord help me.
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Jenny Molloy
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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 May 2009

Emotions pouring out......wow! very well composed

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Chitra - 28 April 2009

poignant and senstive

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Eyan Desir 27 April 2009

This poem was good But it needs more flow

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