White Slash

White Slash

some where in a farm house in Okalahoma
Tuesday, December 30, 2008

Knight In Shining Armor Comments

Rating: 5.0

I know I haven’t met you yet,
There is distance to be covered,
The many miles between us,
That separates your heart from mine.
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Silence Dogood 02 January 2009

I dont overly enjoy free style poetry but i did enjoy this piece. Some lines I liked better than others such as ' Screaming innocence' & ' and the nightmares within' I love the idea and the way you presented it

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Viola Grey 01 January 2009

I love the 'screaming innocence'...it is a fantastic idea....nice write

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Saint Cynosure 31 December 2008

Hey, not to bad for your second piece... Keep it up! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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White Slash

some where in a farm house in Okalahoma
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