Sunday, November 11, 2007

Knife With My Wrist Comments

Rating: 4.1

I'm gonna draw a picture,
a picture with a twist..
im gonna get a knife,
and draw it on my wrist..
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I wish i was as invisable as he made me feel
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This is one of my favortie poems that you've written. I've read it at least a 100 times. It's really powerful. I love it!

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Amie-Lee ...... 07 September 2008

This is a really deep poem, this underlines how I feel sometimes. Thankyou so much for sharing XxAmie-LeexX

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, aryaindia 23 July 2008

As far as I know, your troubles will start only then............it's perhaps the last thing one should think of doing. It leaves a scar for the rest of your life and why ever should anyone misuse their bodies thus? God meant it that we should live in peace and harmony.....arya

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Lacey Unknown 30 March 2008

This is a really great poem. Sad... but written with so much emotion and truth.

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You put a lot of pain into your verse. Glad I got to read what you wrote and I hope you foster your talent and creativity for many years to come.

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Private Griffin 12 November 2007

CHOCOLATE(srry can't spell) and wow i love the poem and trust me as much as u try u can't be invisible but i wish ppl can be

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 11 November 2007

wow... deep. great work.

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