Thursday, November 19, 2020

Knife Of Unfaithfulness Comments

Rating: 4.5

Looking at a forsaken love, feeling the joy fading into a
nothingness, so empty as a void in the universe - a black
hole possibly.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Mahtab Bangalee 19 November 2020

A sadness that just will not be lifted because of the intense feeling of being forsaken and forgotten, being alone in this world once more without love. /// nice poetic writing; without love this heart is vacuum flask!

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Khairul Ahsan 19 November 2020

Poignant feelings of emptiness vividly expressed in the poem. Touched.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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