Wednesday, September 9, 2015
Knife And Bark Comments
Rating: ★5.0
You are the knife. I'm the bark.
You carve love on me and makes me shine.
You send tingles to my heart and shield me from harm.
But it also come with bad, that I never expect.
...
Read full text
COMMENTS
Kelly Kurt
09 September 2015
A very nicely penned poem, especially for one so young. Thanks
1
0
Reply
Best Poems
Best Member Poems
Best Classical Poems
New Poems
New Poets
Best Member Poets
Best Classical Poets
Explore Poems
Explore Poets
Poem Of The Day
Love Poems
Baby Poems
Death Poems
Sad Poems
Birthday Poems
Wedding Poems
Nature Poems
Sorry Poems
Hero Poems
Poetry E-Books
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
7/25/2025 7:04:32 PM # 1.0.0
Very good imagery, intense poem! Good rhyming! Watch where you add (s) ! (loves - love) (makes - make) (its - it) (remind - should be remind(s) . Your writing is remarkable, surprising me with your eloquence of imagery and thought! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Thank you for the feedback, I'll improve on it ^^