Knees Comments

Inner diagnosis! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Kesav you make a strong point here with a very strong metaphoric write.....our chase to reach the top and stay there is shortlived....we need to bow before our Maker

Thanks Sridevi. I am happy at least one of the readers so far, could get to the correct message inside my metaphoric write. The 'craze' is the relentless race we undertake in life to achieve highs- bracing up- at the expense of our soul- knees. 'My Ortho' there means God. Whatever highs we achieve, at the end of the 'race', we are forced to renounce all and to kneel before HIM for the final judgment- Inner Diagnosis Thanks Again

The craze to be at the top always....but ultimately we have to bend forward before HIM.

Let the young enthusiasts do their part of the job. Well worded.10

Great use of metaphor. Very touching and a bit poignant as well. Warm regards, Sandra

i can empathize with you on this.....my knees are starting to complain..... yes, knees are meant for praying....hopefully we can still bend them!

how tie flies, before we know our body begins to give subtle messages, which we ignore an inside craze an inside craze to remain at top always! its the inner flexibilty and resilience that ultimately stands the test of time. great metaphorical write Mamta

Wow...so interesting approach!

Dual meaning...pray, you get well soon to the top most

Very intelligent and subtle piece Kesav, like the way you introduce the title.

Very true and very strong thoughts written in short and simple... :)

knees plea for inner diagnosis too...a very clever write

Once again you've succeeded writing a poem that gives multiple choices of interpretations, both on physical and subtle planes, a clever write with both a meaning and message!

kneels are to walk run and kneel too...i did have this problem sometime back..walking round and round...i discontinued that..and after loosing some weight too i feel knee less...a very practical poem...hats off