Monday, August 2, 2010
Kneeling For Your Ways, Dedicated To Poetiwife Comments
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When told to hold a pen in order to write a poem,
The sacred feeling over the mountains asks who I am
In response, that being is water flowing with soul,
Carrying the pieces of rocks that will never stay cool
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Okan Emanet
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Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~
02 August 2010
Your pen..the paint brush of your mind. Much expression flowing through this poem! Lovely; D
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7/26/2025 5:08:16 PM # 1.0.0
the most thing i like about your poems is the metaphor....your wide imagining is very helpful for you to make your metaphor...can you write a metaphorical poem about the metaphor itself? ..that would be great if you wish to.you own the choice. thanks for sharing