Monday, August 2, 2010

Kneeling For Your Ways, Dedicated To Poetiwife Comments

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When told to hold a pen in order to write a poem,
The sacred feeling over the mountains asks who I am
In response, that being is water flowing with soul,
Carrying the pieces of rocks that will never stay cool
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Omar Ibrahim 03 August 2010

the most thing i like about your poems is the metaphor....your wide imagining is very helpful for you to make your metaphor...can you write a metaphorical poem about the metaphor itself? ..that would be great if you wish to.you own the choice. thanks for sharing

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Your pen..the paint brush of your mind. Much expression flowing through this poem! Lovely; D

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