Humanity bleeds in the claws of a sinister Dragon
Life withers and twists like brittle leaves
Breath becomes laboured and cough breaks forth
Sounding like echoes heard inside a cave
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My God! This is a very powerful poem that entails a dire warning for those who hold God in despite, all in the name of science which in itself is a scion of the Almighty. The expression " castles we built of quicksand" cleverly depicts our precarious hold on " success" which we venerate, but they are ultimately in dearth of the true plinth, God.
Your poem is a humble Bea, simple flea and earnest plea to the god to show grace on human race in appealing manner. Yes rarely but surely god hits with such virus. Best way is to be in humble supplication before God of death. A very impressive words flowed into a first class rhyme 👍 👌👌👌!
Amazing work. You have always been wonderful and a fantastic poet
We are in difficult time. The world is in danger. There is no alternative. We have to pray God. Both man and science have become powerless to help us. We should adopt the path of God. He is faithful to save us. He can only save us from danger. Kneel Down And Pray is an outstanding poem., , ..10++
Beautiful expression of trust in our Lord God. It breaks our hearts to see so many thousands of deaths in our countries, in our world, and see bodies being stacked in refrigerators awaiting burial. We must kneel down and pray, my friend and trust. The worst that can happen is we go see Him and our loved ones earlier than we wanted. God bless you and keep you, dear Valsa
At present there is no alternative but to stay at home. A smallest possible virus has changed the living style of entire world. Human has never felt so helpless before. this is how nature takes revenge when we can't listen to its cry when we destroy the flora and fauna. a nice poem on the hot topic brilliantly crafted. Loved it.10++
Wonderful poem.This worldwide crisis has shook us all down. But our faith in the almighty's mercy is the guiding light for us all. Stay home and stay safe. This too shall pass.
The ultimate stanza contains powerful words igniting the minds of readers to unite and rise from this adversity. Yes, this is not the time to sow hatred. It is the time of healing and understanding. And we can conquer this darkness by the power of our Faith. In God's own time, we can beat Covid 19. A great poem. A poetic gem. Ontoy Poem List.
How can I not respond to such a wonderful comment. In fact you, through your great comment have added an extra lustre to my poem..... Rose Marie! This is a line by line analysis and all thoughts I tried to include in this poem, you have beautifully highlighted. An excellent critique! ! I thank you from the bottom of my heart. In fact I enjoy reading all your comments on my poems! Stay blessed!
I like how the great Poetess had presented this poem. It expresses in brilliant detail and beautiful words the sufferings of men. So vividly portrayed that a reader could feel the greatest fear of....death.
Our faith in God Almighty is often tested in times of uncertainty. When we are at our most vulnerable state, we tend to cling to His power and wait his favorable action for our ardent prayers. Yet, sometimes we might not be able to get any answer in a flick of the finger. We have to wait and sometimes in waiting, doubts cloud the minds of.people on His power to.heal and bring order.
A powerful poem of deep faith, insightful and uplifting. An excellent write beautifully crafted in its form and contents. It has that power of.persuasion. that could fuel the mind of a reader to go with the thoughts of the.great Poetess... to kneel and pray to God Almighty.
Well written poem Valsa. Much truth and sense inside. Man proposes God disposes 10+
thanks for such a beautiful autumnal comment VG Autumn is so colorful in most of the western countries when the leaves turn into multi shades of russet, brown, yellow, orange and red. It is a season awaited by all! I was fortunate to see this change of color in last October when I went to the US for a one month's trip! A beautiful poem on Autumn!
The unseen terminator is now unleashed. Humanity is on the claws of the claws of the sinister dragon and is straining to intake a puff of air.. Death is taking away life indiscreminately. Kneel down before God and pray leaving aside your arrogance and ego
True. And we accept the will of God. And we pray and we should pay thanks by words and deeds.
But kneel down in humility and cry your heart out See Him as the sail and hull of your ship And trust the one who alone can calm the storm we like phoenix from the ashes, shall rise! BEAUTIFULLY SUMMARISED VG
The outbreak of Corona virus is so dangerous now for which man is forced to keep aloof from man due to lack of its medicine or antibiotic. People are to be locked within four walls. Sciencists and educationists become powerless. Now we have to pray to God. A brilliant poem with impressive inscription is amazingly shared here.
Does " a sinister Dragon" refer to China? Is " nearness" being a " threat" an innuendo to the current pandemic?