Tuesday, April 16, 2013

Kkkkk.Autumn's Ceremony Comments

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There stood an imaginary
and invisible houri fairy
a bride under a maple tree
Dressed in prism-hued layers
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 March 2020

There stood an imaginary and invisible houri fairy a bride under a maple tree Dressed in prism-hued layers of chifon in ethereal shimmers and delicate gossamer..... brilliant beginning with thrilling expression. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 26 July 2013

beautiful imagery, beautiful words, beautiful poem very good works thankz for sharing

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Alvin Willis 28 May 2013

Hey thanks for checking out my poem: Lifeless. I like all of the descriptive and precise details of your poems.....Great work....and hope to see and read more.

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R.j. Wynn 10 May 2013

A fresh look at imagery for me, love it.

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Yasmin Khan 08 May 2013

Autumn beauty personified into a fairy....beautiful images from nature and autumn hues.

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Saadat Tahir 04 May 2013

delicate imaginative and vivid like mid autumn in countless parks across europe nicely penned creates a visual liked

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Valsa George 16 April 2013

This strange bride under the maple tree showered by nature's pretty confetti is an alluring image! Enjoyed reading it!

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