Thursday, November 15, 2012

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Charity starts at home don't we say?
Be kind to kith and kin come what may.

A family's not only your safe haven
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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* Sunprincess * 08 March 2015

......a beautiful tribute to family :)

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Soulful Heart 08 July 2013

Wow.....u hv put d beast thoughts in vverse, ...shud b a mustt read for new generation

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Colin Bradley 31 March 2013

Well said charity begins at home

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John Shea 30 January 2013

Lovely zay...I am but an old derelict but practice charity.

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Kevin Patrick 20 December 2012

Family should be the bond that is unbreakable unfortunately that bond is tested by some people, who look after themselves without thinking of their loved once. I really do like the third last stanza which says Charity need not be for strangers only Find out who needs help in kindred and family On this earth all men and women come from the same mother, we are all brothers and sisters, to bad we move into separate rooms. Thank you for sharing this delightful work

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Bri Edwards 16 December 2012

great expression of thought. i enjoyed very much. actually, though i don't think of it as charity, i do sometimes think to myself that if i can't do something (each day would be nice) to make MYSELF feel good, then why should i bother keeping on with life. in my case i kill two birds with one stone as i enjoy helping others with words or deeds, so by helping others i am at the same time making myself feel good and therefore i feel my life is still worth living. i DO phone my four siblings more than they phone me. that's the influence of my mother on me. she is dead now, so she can no longer be the family member to prompt family-connecting. thanks for sharing.

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Sandra Feldman 09 December 2012

If most poet's good sentiments and advice were followed, we would be just one, great big, loving family here on Earth and really the United Family of Nations. Your poem ads a lot to our well being individual and collectively, So true, the most important thing in our lives should be our family, living in harmony and love, I loved It. Congratulations.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 01 December 2012

very good advise and I agree with your views!

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Rose Flores 29 November 2012

Indeed, charity begins at home! A beautiful message to the world! Thank you for sharing. Have a blessed day.

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Sahil Sood 27 November 2012

A very beautiful poem.. And a true message, we should value our family..a great poem..

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Randy Hogan 27 November 2012

So true, family is your greatest thing that will fill your life. Diamonds or gold shall never hold like the sweet mother arms. Warm thank yous I ever send your way. ~*~Randy

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Danny Draper 26 November 2012

Nice poem and message.

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Vijay Sai R 22 November 2012

its true that charity begins at home...nice poem

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Tunji Ibrahim 19 November 2012

Spine-tingling. You have beautifully and meticulously raised a universal topic. FriEND, BoyfiEND, GirlfriEND, BestfriEND... Everything has an end, except FamILY which has three letters (ILY) that say: 'I LOVE YOU'. The importance of family cannot be overdramatised.

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Lyn Paul 16 November 2012

Love your title of this poem and most of all the poem itself. Well written and something to get you thinking. Thank You

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