Kitne Hi They Safar.. Comments

wah..bahuth khoob maza aagaya padhney me..

Dil ko choo jaane wali ek behtareen nazm.....Khabhi khud ko kabhi halaat ko........Kisko dosh de hum...10+++++

Rishtey bhi they naate bhi they Chahate bhi they matlabi bhi they Kehne ko kunbaa tha bhara mera Magar dil k kunbe ko jo bharta Aisa koi apna nhi mila mujhko kabhi Karwa sach zindagi ka...bas khud se dosti karlo to kissi ke mohtaj nahi rahenge. very touchy poem.

Safar jari hay agar to ek na ek din koi humsafar aysa mil hi jata hay jo manzil tak sath deta hay. Ek sunder prabhavit karne wali kavita.

Har safar me tanha chalte rahe hum... Na jaane kab ye manhoos tanhayi hi humsafar ban gayi... Sukhriya Abhilasha.. A brilliant poem here..

rokney ki koshish hi nhi ki kisiney.... mein to tadap raha tha na janey ko.... ek baar keh to dete ki aaogey tum..... kisi bahaney sey tal deta aapni maut ko...... grrt penned mam ji