Kites Of Jaffa Comments

The sudden fall of snow like pellets fired from the guns and cannons make the people shut inside! Like an unexpected truce, when the fall ceases, people come out all enthused! But everything repeats and people once again retreat indoors! The abrupt occurrence of snow storm is beautifully presented! Excellent write! ! Doug, I wish you a wonderful New Year! !

Winter snow fall nicely presented. As a battle. People back at their TV sets finally. Any entertainment seems temporary. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

You've painted quite the descriptive scene here......the snow, the kites, the people the sast stanza wrapped the whole thing up neatly. Enjoyable!