Feel my love and let our hearts fly
Like two beautiful kites in the sky....
Away from the rules of this world
Just in control of thread of our love! ! !
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beautiful poem with imagination and comparision.. :) just loved reading it
It is like very nice imagination...i would like to see that two kites from sky by sitting on cozy white clouds, and blow a strong wind...Friend this is nice but, what make the kites fly high is depend on the wind and weather, and the wind that help ur love kites is only trust and to each other, once u trust there is no reason to ruin...love this poem as usual
Kites when come close, threads get entangled. We used to call this as 'DEAL' in childhood. Let there be no DEALS; but LEELS. All the Best.
AGREED... such a wonderful poem to describe love freely.. beauty of love describes in this poem... GREAT
The freedom of true love. Beautifully described through your poem! Beautiful! ; D
Very Good poem with noble love! nicely penned with marvelous imagination. rated 9/10. Visit my poem I've fallen in love....and THE RAINBOW...to enjoy further in love! Thanks for inviting.
What a splendid comparison here! Best part: Still we love to fly high in the sky Tangling in love; until we die! ! !
I loved it so muchππππππππππ