Kite, Kite Oh Kite Comments

kite, kite o' kite you do not fight like us brutal mankind fly you on the sky with your soft heart hug the vastness, all you bind

Thanks for this lovely poem apparently written for children but has the potential to surcharge the lives of all who seek divine bliss and righteousness in life. The kite connects us with God and His indulgence. Thanks for sharing it. My Favourite Poem.

Great work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L:

What a beautiful poem! Enjoyed its beauty and enjoyed its melody............10

Kite, Kite oh Kite! Please fly to God, Connect me through your thread Enjoyed this highly rhyming poem! The poet here longs to get connected to God even through the thread of a kite!

Life also flies like kite. Beautiful nicely penned.

Poet's PagePoemsCommentsStatsBiographySend MessageShare on FacebookShare on Twitter Poems by Kumarmani Mahakul: 24 / 42 « Jump to Heaven in TimeLearn From Tree » Kite, Kite Oh Kite Kite, Kite oh Kite! How above are you? Left to right, right to left You swing in a queue. Low to high, high to low You dance in the sky, Front to back, back to front You waddle never cry. Black to white, white to black You twist side by side, Green to yellow, yellow to green In clouds sometimes hide. Red to blue, blue to red You design your body, Winter to summer, summer to winter To fly you are ready. Need to money, money to need You do ever think, Money is nectar, money is honey People want to drink. Man to man, money to money Show respect to all, Lack of money tragedy life/... nice lines..10 kite kit kie always go up and fight spread the love and peace message so you name can be printed on page

great metaphor......................i have never thought about such an incomparable comparison...............this is outstanding....thanks,

This is a poem for children of course.But, the metaphor Kite denotes a deeper layer of meaning.Kite is not only a medium of, symbol of pure joy and innocence.It's a mediator between the desire unfulfilled and the cherished dream.A lovely poem.

Red to blue, blue to red You design your body, Winter to summer, summer to winter To fly you are ready.-beautiful poem

sir as always a good rhyming poem for all....enjoyed reading