Friday, March 4, 2016

Kite: Τhe Proud Flag Of Your Skill Comments

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There pegged the eyes on the paper keel
backwards running to get it at the air
hand-over-hand loosening the line to pull the kite aloft,
back again, pulling in on the line a bit of tension to provide
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Kelly Kurt 04 March 2016

This brings back memories. I used to make my own kites as a child. Using old newspapers, twigs from trees, string, and rags to make the tail, I created kites of various shapes and sizes. Getting them launched successfully was a thrill and watching them shrink to mere dots as they soared hundreds of feet high, gave me a thrill and perspective. That same thrill and perspective permeate my life today when my mind soars with new discoveries.

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Dimitrios Galanis 04 March 2016

To that thrill and perspective hints the poem.You caught it, dear Kelly. Seeing your comment now, it is like I have written to cover your case.Thank you my dear.

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Jaishree Nair 04 March 2016

The kite flying high enjoying the freedom in the control of reins by expert hands.A metamorphic poem.Enjoyed the presentation. Thank you for sharing

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Dimitrios Galanis 04 March 2016

I hoped that readers would see indeed its metaphorical and allegoric meaning.Pleased that you saw it.Thank you so much.

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Dimitrios Galanis 04 March 2016

Any suggestion for a better wording, or amendments of expressions, will be with pleasure accepted.

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