Kite Flies Away Comments

Full of hope and confidence it is a very nice poem. Liked it. Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful poem dear poet! Each and every line is beautiful.. Fabulously penned poem!

Akhil, We face headwinds that try to fell us wherever we go, whatever we do. But yes, sooner or later, if we persevere, clouds run away and give us space to fly. Live our life that we want. And try to make it LARGE. Your poem exudes lot of positive energy. Great poetry. Do continue to write. Thank you sharing.

before you love something, you must learn to let them go..... very true

Try to make it large! But, with positiveness. Nice work.

Kite flies, superb, do more, all the best.

Lovely thoughtful piece! Deeply moving thanks for sharing

Before you love something, you must learn to let them go.......its the big fact of our life...... simply awesome...... :)

Cool, calm, peaceful and delightful. Powerful ink says a lot about kite and life with identical nature of flying. Thanks for sharing.10+

There are lines in this that are simply gorgeous, calling the reader to share your experience as if we were there: - - - ] There was a day in my life; I spread my wings to find you, What a Peace full day that was, no one tried to make me fall. - -] The wind starts dancing with my kite and fly away from me. And clouds run away from sky and gave me space to fly. Live your life that you want, try to make it large. - - - - - - - - - - - - - ] the image of that kite and your flying of it is so well handled.

Deep! Thoughtful! And nicely expressed!

I feel you are comparing pain and love to a kite. When the wind is too strong, the kite flies away from us. If the kite is carrying pain, that is a good thing. Let it fly away. But when love flies away, it hurts too much. We want to chase after it, but that is not always possible. So when we have love, we must enjoy it and appreciate it and work hard not to lose it. Hold tightly to the kite of love - strong winds are always present, trying to tear it from our hands. Very nice poem.