Kite Comments

This poem is pretty and well crafted, it depicts the innocent pleasure of the child we all once were, enjoying and loving the simple blessings of life : ) Well penned!

Just wonderful.....love to read time and again..

Beautiful write TFS Bravo! ! ! !

I like to have lots of string and fly near and far and do little acrobatics!

I feel so liberated....... brilliant......thank u, dear poetess......

I feel so liberated......significant...

Liberating in the sky is wonderfully experienced.

So light poem))) Thank you!

What a delight of a poem! Freedom in flight, so simple but with such spiritual might.

I can feel that freedom too, dear great Poetess. Excellent words in the poem.

I have a small kite and I love it.....beautiful....loved reading this cute poem!

Rose Mar Juan Austin I have a small heart Made of true love original craft, it is so bland I let it roam in the universe I feel so proud.

A very strong and expressive text, stemming from the spirit of modern poet, flying high far away from the dirty earth, such as a big value of your poem, shining in the sky, staying on the top list of poets ... .. Wonderful piece of work it deserves 10 and onto my favorite list..well done

I let it fly in the sky I feel so liberated

A most fine poem Rose Marie filled with great symbolism and to make one feel alive and free. And your poem brings many happy memories flooding back.10+ and added to my favs. Take care and many thanks and for the recalled memories too.

A happy poem, that rises up. Nice use of the poetic symbol 10+

Glorious poem. Thank u.anjandev roy.

Though tied with a string kite is a symbol of freedom. Flying kite is like freeing one's inner child as someone said. Freedom is enjoyed best when with some self imposed strings. Unfortunately the common idea of freedom id quite different. Indian classical singers sing raga-based melodies with a lot of restrictions as to the notes they can use for a particular Raga. And still there is immense improvisations and freedom in treatment. Simple and so deep.

An express train for Childhood stands on the third platform. Travelers from the wagon number 10 I wish a safe trip and a pleasant journey.

Kite is a symbol of freedom, dreams, hope and positivity. A nice little poem.10++