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Well articuated and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm........

A wonderful poem well crafted and expressed. Great imagery.

Congratulations being the Modern Poem Of The Day. So loveliest and amazing poetic expressions

Gratefulness and hope were used beautifully back then. I remember the shared bath water also as a child.

Even if we were willing to let it in, Had time to warm it, keep it very clean, Anticipate a message, let it begin? ......./// beautiful poetic expression

A very good poem. Thanks for sharing

But could a dream sent up through onion fumes Its white and violet, fight with fried potatoes And yesterday's garbage ripening in the hall, Flutter, or sing an aria down these room.. very fine poem of Gwendolyn

Lukewarm water! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

One of the best poems by Gwendolyn Brooks......