Saturday, February 17, 2018

Kissing A Flower (A Comment On Antonio J. Rivas M's Poem "Look For" Comments

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And what we are,
aren't we the delicacy of flowers in our lips,
with the exciting colors
bringing your face so close to that of mine,
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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 February 2018

A romantic poem with a great embrace to flower! ...I want your ecstasy enter my heart and soul/I want a moment when nothing exists other than you and me/let me kiss sweetheart and see what happens after that.....Loved reading this fabulous little piece of poetry!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 February 2018

let me transfer sweet fragrance of love to your heart, I want your ecstasy enter my heart and soul, .... Loved these lines. Beautiful poem as a comment.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 February 2018

Ooh a sensational passion in flowery art poem. Thumbs up poet, u can write well on anything. Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too titled 'song for lunarlovers

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Rini Shibu 17 February 2018

Simply beautiful..flower with attractive color and smell radiant happiness

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