feather touches
shivers quivering down
warmth welling up from the bottom
feeling as if about to burst from within
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So deep and T R U E...You've described so well such a great profound natural feeling that only happens on its own. I read it to a friend who said ' WOW, That's a DEEP POEM! ' - Loved it.
Nicely done - captures that passionate moment so well.. -chuck