Tuesday, June 20, 2006

Kissed With Affection Comments

Rating: 4.8

The mist adorns the nestling hills,
and on the air, one hears the trills,
of the waking birds, as one and all,
give out their melodious morning call.
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Ernestine Northover
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Ernest Makuakua 28 December 2015

hmm so sweet and inspiring love the piece

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 23 February 2015

An excellent treat for all mindful mouths, garnished with a range of nature's flavors. I love nature, and so with your poem.

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Andrew Blakemore 09 July 2008

A beautiful pastoral poem, I wish I had written it. Love Andrew x

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Duncan Wyllie 20 June 2006

And you have kissed our mind with a sweet, poem that livens the heart Love Duncan X

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Patricia Gale 20 June 2006

Splendi, peaceful read! The imagery fantastic. Thank you for the view. Patricia

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Scarlett Treat 20 June 2006

What a lovely, peaceful poem, Ernestine. Well done. I sat on my porch the other night as dusk came down, and there was a whippoorwill singing his heart out, hearlding the coming night...how beautiful it was! Now, if I could just write a poem like this about that! Good job.

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ERNESTINE...I LIKE THIS VERY MUCH...WARM, SMOOTH EVENFLOW...SERENE IN TEXT, CRISP IN STRUCTURE...AN ACCOMPLISHED WORK AS I SEE IT....''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Joseph Daly 20 June 2006

A lovely warm poem Ernestine. I love the way that it flows sogracefully.

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