Thursday, August 18, 2011

Kissed Me Killed Me Comments

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You kissed me then you killed me
you left me and broke me
you lied
i cried
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Grace DeVon miller
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Stefanie Fontker 18 August 2011

Tragic, and passionate. Beautiful writing, I like this a lot.

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Anthony Joseph Erangey 18 August 2011

I enjoyed the terseness and simplicity of this poem. Powerful in its message and emotional in it's rhyme. Well done.

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