Kiss The Flame Comments

Very beautiful writing! I think especially the end I think it's really strong: " I shall dance in the dark places of your mind. Sometimes we must kiss the flame." Keep writing!

Top marks for this wonderful write! *****

4) it is really enticing to read " I shall dance in the dark places of your mind. ". Great Top Score and added to MyFavourites

3) it is the most macho of all Hindu Gods Lord Siva who shares His body and soul with His consort Parvathi to become One! The Ardhanareeswara.

But, the ultimate of the ‘dwandas' you use light/darkness, yin/yang is "Ardhanareeswara" (half woman & half man) one of the fundamental concepts of Hindu religion and philosophy

Interesting poem. Top score. It is but natural that when ‘I' (the poet) is a ‘she' the snake and the firebird are she's too. but very interesting. I think, given a chance "worlds" and "flames" also would be she's under your pen