Saturday, May 25, 2019

Kiss Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you blunder
The world does thunder
When you light a flickering candle
lightening precedes it
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Mahtab Bangalee 27 May 2019

kiss me I PRAY else ask your God to take my life away......................WELL

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Prabir Gayen 26 May 2019

When you blunder The world does thunder When you light a flickering candle lightening precedes it and as you open your lips clouds burst and it rains drips your tight dress and unveils what is hidden tightly within... deeply poetic and beautiful allegory

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Prabir Gayen 26 May 2019

come and kiss me now just now today right away.....sweet

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Prabir Gayen 26 May 2019

So, kiss me I PRAY else ask your God to take my life away.... beautiful

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Anjandev Roy 26 May 2019

Magnificent write. Concluding stanza amazing. Thank u.anjandev roy..

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Kevin Patrick 25 May 2019

Love the opening lines, instantly grab me with force, the force of a great kiss can make a hurricane welt and his, the magnetism of two bodies can make nature run. Your a true original me poet.

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Chan Mongol 25 May 2019

A very well orchestrated poem with aromas and beauties of good spirits and with depth of thoughts. Thanks for sharing your masterpiece

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thank u so much I must read ur poem as else you won't again here come

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 May 2019

come and kiss me now just now today right away

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