Thursday, May 21, 2009

Kiss Of Death! ...(On 31, May.. No Tobacco Day) Comments

Rating: 5.0

(Approaching, No tobacco day)

Pale faced sit at the radiologist's den,
eyeing him scribble a Montblanc pen.
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COMMENTS
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 30 April 2010

‘Kick of nicotine Push your head under guillotine’ Nice write Sir 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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rago rago 08 July 2009

pain and strain are the days purchasing in pennies........ let the kiss of death embarass them........ thought provoking poem........

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 June 2009

'Pain and strain your friendly tie. Till, you from cancer, one day die.' A nice poem with a nice message.10+++

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Brishti Mazumdar 14 June 2009

Allow your elders fresh air to breathe Already for air they long and seethe Important messages are conveyed thru a simply styled verse....I just loved to go thru it.Thank you for the message...10++++++ from Brishti

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Indira Babbellapati 02 June 2009

great couplets reminding one of pope!

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Naidz Ladia 31 May 2009

slogan says''SAY NO TO CIGARETTES'... this piece is quiet interesting coz it rhymes and it does many things for example you portay the tobacco as a bad fling so careful to sniffed that dangerous thing... smoking is dangerous to your health as doctors say so, why not stop? ...don't try to smoke addictly just live without it, just live simply for a long life with friends and family.. nothing is lost if we care ourselves so that no complications in our health like cancer chemotherapy is very expensive dear am sure, we cant recover due to a very expensive care..........naizz

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Pandian Angelina 29 May 2009

Saadat, I am taking a Printout and making copies for my Office Notice Board and also personal copies for friends, I know. Hope and pray, it touches and reaches the hearts and souls of all who read it and help them take one step towards Quitting! Thanks for the wonderful poem, Doctor! Angel

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