As you sow, so you reap"
Bear this advice in mind and keep
Nothing goes in waste
Even if bitter truth remains
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Very well advices being made here, which will surly guide us to lead a happy and peacful life.
Good Muhammad Khalid Khan12 minutes ago Kiss of death Comment 0
Fantastic use of rhyming scheme Lilly Bayford9 minutes ago There is a nice rhyming pattern and beat. Be sure to edit in the first quotation mark in the beginning. Yes do not love much is a bit of a confusing line Overall, very good :) Comment +1
nice rhythm Rachel Marie12 minutes ago good verses Comment +1
It was just ok jenniej11 minutes ago I liked the fact you believe in love and It's obvious someone once hurt you. Thank you for sharing that poem. It was ok
good advise sir 26 Aug by David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost) to Kiss of death
San Palad likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1
As you sow, so you reap” Bear this advice in mind and keep
Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh! 21 hrs · Unlike · 1