Randy Hogan

Randy Hogan

pænˈ dʒ iː ə Mountain Range
Monday, June 1, 2009

~*~ Kiss Me Under The Stars Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tempest sweeps as tempestuous weeps
across the arid dessert so dry.
For I await a gentle breeze to part her lips
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Randy Hogan
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Anjali Sinha 12 June 2009

wowwwwwwwww its awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! -10 anjali

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Reshma Ramesh 10 June 2009

wow.....this is breath takingly beautiful............

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The first line sets the scene for a sweeping scene for a simply divine love poem Randy. It hooked me! 10 Karin Anderson

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Fay Slimm 02 June 2009

This breathes with love under a night sky - and the rhyming scheme although unusual is just right for the mood of the piece...... lovely....10 from Fay

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Fiona Davidson 01 June 2009

great write....10+++

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Randy Hogan

Randy Hogan

pænˈ dʒ iː ə Mountain Range
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