Tempest sweeps as tempestuous weeps
across the arid dessert so dry.
For I await a gentle breeze to part her lips
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The first line sets the scene for a sweeping scene for a simply divine love poem Randy. It hooked me! 10 Karin Anderson
This breathes with love under a night sky - and the rhyming scheme although unusual is just right for the mood of the piece...... lovely....10 from Fay
wowwwwwwwww its awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! -10 anjali