Thursday, January 5, 2006

Kiss Me Quick Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sounds very Simple to do,
To Kiss me Quick
But your Love must be True
And to catch me, is the Trick
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David Darbyshire
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kAy BaRCeLon 29 August 2007

Funny Mr. Darbyshire. Lips twisting and Turning? I imagine someone practicing... Your poems make me smile; I like your cheerful outlook on things... The innocence you portray in some of your writings is so refreshing! Please continue to entertain us...Thanks

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Dee Daffodil 25 April 2006

Hmmmm...maybe you better slow down a little if you want to be caught...

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Joy Vanderhelm 10 March 2006

Nice one, David, though I seem to remember the line beginnning 'When our lips do meet... ' somewhere else among your poems. A good write though.

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Mary Nagy 05 January 2006

A great poem Dave.......and a nice challenge for somebody! :) Sincerely, Mary

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Vij Moh 05 January 2006

lucky lips they must be who have been kissed quick! . lovely poem Vijay

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Charles Chaim Wax 05 January 2006

and you deserve all you get your words enticing all who read them a fine poem

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