Eat me, drink me,
Float me, sink me.
There's nothing else.
There's no one else.
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nice style, however it could be longer and deeper, (more specific/intimate) also, could you, if you you are free, comment and critique my poems. thank you
I tend to use the phrase 'Kiss me, kill me' in a bunch of my other poems. I'll upload some longer, more in-depth ones when I can.