Wednesday, November 14, 2018

Kiss Me By Kissing Him Comments

Rating: 5.0

A little hysterical, a little sexy, and a little quarrelsome,
He purchases everyday meat scraps to listen to the eagles,
Not a very good man of beauty but he is a little handsome,
His poetic heart is made of love, soul are the sweet whistles,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Aqua Flower 21 November 2018

Wonderful! Loved this so mjuch that I am putting on my favorites so I can read again! The ending is my favorite as it really sums up the poem nicely! 10

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M Asim Nehal 21 November 2018

Outstanding poem and to sum up I quote from your poem itself: Mai aur mera wajood kya hai... His poem is a mirror in that it's my image so nicely reflected, Otherwise man has left nothing to make my face refracted!

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Binayakumar Mohanty 17 November 2018

Nicely crated poem sir. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 November 2018

A poem splendidly writ, especially the last stanza.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 November 2018

just beautiful poetry sir ji now few comment on mine so my posts need to be reduced old age man

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 November 2018

A great and powerful write. It captures the very essence of Poetry and Poet. Beautifully crafted and executed by a magnificent Poet's Ink.10

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Nadia Umber Lodhi 15 November 2018

reflected, Otherwise man has left nothing to make my face refracted!

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Rini Shibu 15 November 2018

Poems are mirrors where the image reflects...perfectly said

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 November 2018

Lovely written- ...state on oath, My Lord he is truly handsome! //// Pair of lips from the ecstatic heart for Your pleasured touching still waiting on the sharp edge of life ..... //// lovely and enjoyed

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