Kiss me...
In Exchange of
My remaining span of life
...
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well I too hanker for kiss only so I have composed poetry on kisses so many great kiss she must give thee ask her will ye
Dear Poet, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.
Kiss me... In Exchange of My remaining span of life Promise me that You would kiss Be it for once only! Amazing and beautiful poem written with a great poetic skill. Full marks on it.
Hi dear, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.
Kiss me... In Exchange of My remaining span of life Promise me that You would kiss Be it for once only! beautiful work with a great poetic skill. Loved the poem and full marks for it.
Oh dear Neetu, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.
the powerful effect of kiss expressed in a philosophical way in your nice poem..full 10 marks to you..
Revered Sir, Thank you dear Poet for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.
Revered Sir, Thank you for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.
heartfills with this poem thanking sir to share this as wm poem with us
Thanks Asit for your kind remark. Expect some more of your comments and rating on other poems too.
Asit, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.
Thank you for your kind remark. I am grateful for your visit to my page. Subhas.
This poem sounds like the song of a moth. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem...
Thank you ma'am for your valuable remarks. Anticipating some more visits to my page. Subhas
Gifted lady love of urs, what a lover u r, beautiful kissy n poem, gud share
Thanks ma'am for the nice remark. I feel honoured. I'm grateful to get some spare moments from you. I would like to have your kind and frequent visits to my page. Namaskar. Subhas.
Thanks ma'am for your kind and lovely remarks. I feel so honoured to have them. I have been rendering my unsuccessful efforts to compose the most beautiful ode to my lady love Seema since years. I seek your blessings for my success in that regard. Thank you ma'am again for the spare moments spent on me. Namaskar. Subhas.
In the grave yard I shall be immortal, With that one kiss of yours, kiss me., a fine poem of love full of the desire to make your lady love yours with a beautiful kiss. fine sentiments.... love your words. thank you. tony
Thank you Sir for your kind concern and the loving encouragement I have always craved for. Your comments fuel my poetic desire, each time you spare a minute for me. Thanks again. Subhas Chakra
That woman would cast you in your grave without a second thought if she needed to. Or felt like it, or was just bored. They are a blank canvas on which men paint their words and call them poems. Thanks for your poem about the self-sacrifice of the male for the female. Or is it yearning for the unattainable and is asexual? But whatever it is, it is very enjoyable and made me think and thanks again.
Thanks sir for the kind reading and sparing of a few valuable moments for commenting on it. I feel grateful to you Sir. Subhas
With my home In the grave yard I shall be immortal, With that one kiss of yours, Be it for once and all! ! A great kiss indeed. 10++++ for the kiss and 100 for you.
Thank you Rimi dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.