Saturday, April 16, 2016

Kiss Me..Be It For Once And All Comments

Rating: 5.0

Kiss me...

In Exchange of
My remaining span of life
...
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
COMMENTS
Prativa Rani 13 November 2017

With my home In the grave yard I shall be immortal, With that one kiss of yours, Be it for once and all! ! A great kiss indeed. 10++++ for the kiss and 100 for you.

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Thank you Rimi dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 September 2017

well I too hanker for kiss only so I have composed poetry on kisses so many great kiss she must give thee ask her will ye

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Dear Poet, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Anita Aparajita Das 21 May 2016

Kiss me... In Exchange of My remaining span of life Promise me that You would kiss Be it for once only! Amazing and beautiful poem written with a great poetic skill. Full marks on it.

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Hi dear, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Anita Aparajita Das 21 May 2016

Kiss me... In Exchange of My remaining span of life Promise me that You would kiss Be it for once only! beautiful work with a great poetic skill. Loved the poem and full marks for it.

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Oh dear Neetu, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Kishore Kumar Das 11 May 2016

the powerful effect of kiss expressed in a philosophical way in your nice poem..full 10 marks to you..

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Revered Sir, Thank you dear Poet for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 May 2016

Be it for once and all! ! Nice work.

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Revered Sir, Thank you for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Asit Kumar Dhir 28 April 2016

heartfills with this poem thanking sir to share this as wm poem with us

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Thanks Asit for your kind remark. Expect some more of your comments and rating on other poems too.

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Asit, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Ric Bastasa 22 April 2016

i love this immortal poem...thanks for sharing

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Thank you for your kind remark. I am grateful for your visit to my page. Subhas.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 18 April 2016

This poem sounds like the song of a moth. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem...

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Thank you ma'am for your valuable remarks. Anticipating some more visits to my page. Subhas

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 17 April 2016

Gifted lady love of urs, what a lover u r, beautiful kissy n poem, gud share

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Thanks ma'am for the nice remark. I feel honoured. I'm grateful to get some spare moments from you. I would like to have your kind and frequent visits to my page. Namaskar. Subhas.

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Thanks ma'am for your kind and lovely remarks. I feel so honoured to have them. I have been rendering my unsuccessful efforts to compose the most beautiful ode to my lady love Seema since years. I seek your blessings for my success in that regard. Thank you ma'am again for the spare moments spent on me. Namaskar. Subhas.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 April 2016

In the grave yard I shall be immortal, With that one kiss of yours, kiss me., a fine poem of love full of the desire to make your lady love yours with a beautiful kiss. fine sentiments.... love your words. thank you. tony

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Thank you Sir for your kind concern and the loving encouragement I have always craved for. Your comments fuel my poetic desire, each time you spare a minute for me. Thanks again. Subhas Chakra

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Jr Gr 16 April 2016

That woman would cast you in your grave without a second thought if she needed to. Or felt like it, or was just bored. They are a blank canvas on which men paint their words and call them poems. Thanks for your poem about the self-sacrifice of the male for the female. Or is it yearning for the unattainable and is asexual? But whatever it is, it is very enjoyable and made me think and thanks again.

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Thanks sir for the kind reading and sparing of a few valuable moments for commenting on it. I feel grateful to you Sir. Subhas

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