Kiss Me Comments

am trying to recall which kiss frozen in my mind

Anna, this was certainly 'a kiss to build a dream on'. I could imagine the cold night and that extra layer of clothes to keep you safe and the wind and its torment. Well done! This is a magical poem. Karin Anderson

i swear i felt the same when i kiss my boyfriend nice sweet poem keep going

this is very sweet. The imagery and emotion are palpable as if I were kissing you as I read it. Thanks.

i loved it so new form other that i have read

that was so classy...keep up the good work! maybe when you have the time you can check mines out? holla back!