Saturday, October 18, 2008

Kiss Me Comments

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Before you leave can you kiss me?
At least a peck ever so gently?
Please bless me with this memory
My lips are wet and ready to set
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Great Imagery! A Wonderful poem!

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Alexandra Gray 02 November 2008

Sweet :) I like how you repeat the First 2 lines in the end. Very emotional write.

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Tai Chi Italy 25 October 2008

Such a sweet sweet image of young lovers you evoke here pure remedy! love it...kissing is such a lovely way to let someone know how much you care for them...even a peck as you so respectfully implore, I feel sure, no she could refuse. Smiling at you, Tai

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