Kiss Me Comments

Cheeky and smart- always a great subject for a poem, a kiss, and this one is done well!

Kiss me and tell me you love me, Kiss me with passion to spare, ........ sometimes eccentricity does not spare me without kiss

Fantastic poem..I love it very much..

Sad, Ernestine, but well delivered. Kiss me is the perfect refrain. Nice to find a poet writing so comfortably in rhyme and meter.

So beautiful! I love this poem, thank you for writing this.

Lovely lines loaded with love and rich in romance!

Good use of the quatrain stanzaic poem. Well nourished with good rhyme scheme of ab ab cd CD SylvaOnyema Uba

well written poem, evoking lots of emotion and passion. I enjoyed reading it. thanks for sharing.

Thank you for such a wonderful piece its beautiful Kiss me and declare you were wrong dear, Kiss me and confirm it's okay, Say all those things that I so want to hear, And wipe all my tears away. Kiss me and let's stay together, Kiss me and pour out the wine, Sit with me on my sofa of leather, And say that everything will be fine

Kiss me and let's stay together, Kiss me and pour out the wine, Sit with me on my sofa of leather, And say that everything will be fine. when the dream melts away, the reader is also very sad. very touching poem dear poetess. thank you. tony

A very touching poem Ernestine, pure quality. Love Andrew

The girls name was Laura and I did so much for her that she no longer saw me as any kind of a challenge.She left me for my best friend, whom I talk to now as if we were brothers.This is such a heartfelt poem and I really enjoyed getting through the pain with you.Love Duncan

This is a very emotional piece Ernestine- you carry its sentiment very well.

Ahhhhh, there are times, when a kiss is not merely a kiss. A really fine poem. Nickoli

A sad poem, I feel for you, but when you say pour out the wine, you mean into a glass, right? otherwise, I'll be even sadder.